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yeah that's a product of spell check, I wrote this in a word document, and I have no idea why the fourth line wasn't capitalized as well that's very weird. ...

Aw, thanks! that's really sweet. Frankly, I'm usually a little embarrassed by my poetry so I don't put it up. It was really nice to get some good constructive criticism ...

While I myself have not been sexually abused, I have friends who have been and I also feel the indignity of women being seen by some men more as objects ...

I'd like some suggestions on who "They" are and why they want Kirsten. If you guys have any suggestions, please let me know! All I ask is they stay mostly ...

Thanks for the review! As for the sci-fi, what you saw of Fen's powers do seem traditionally sci-fi, but it isn't by magic that he's able to do that. If ...

Thanks for pointing out the pronoun switches. It was originally in first person and I just now decided to switch to third limited, so there may be a few slip-ups ...

Dear fourteen year old self. You're better than this.

I appreciate the harshness, actually. That's how I get my best feedback. Thatns for the help!

Yeah, but I couldn't resist. Reviews are fun! I'll tell you again tomorrow if you'd like.

You love shapeshifting? *Gasp* I had no idea! I mean, it's not like you have this amazing storybook that everyone should go check out right now that deals with that ...

sure thing!

Thanks for the feedback! I hand't even noticed most of the stuff you'd pointed out when I was reading through the chapter.

Glad you liked it!

Hey. I actually left that vague on purpose, to keep the readers guessing. But the race of these characters are explained further in the next chapter.(Which I'm still drafting out.)

Thank you for pointing all this out. I'll go back and Edit right away!