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Hey there! This is a review from TheFantasy14! I really thought this was very interesting. The detail was great, I flowed fairly well, and your characters seem realistic and, most ...

Hey! Once again, awesome job! I think you did a great job fitting the prophecy into your story, and i loved the "Dam ketchup, Dam bottle" bit. it made my ...

Hey there! Welcome to the site, TheLearningWriter. I'm TheFantasy14 here for a review. I usually am not fond of realistic fiction, but yours really interested me. Your protagonist reminded me ...

I like what you have going in here. I would really like to know more about Owen and these guardian people. One question though. If Owen isn't a guardian, then ...

Hey there! This is TheFantasy14! I am a huge fan of rick riordan and I really think you did an excellent job with this fanfiction. You captured all the cannon ...

Hey. Me again. This was one of my favorite passages, and the last two were great to begin with. I loved the humor. The style of it fit it's narrator ...

Hey there Lau. This is TheFantasy14! Great work as always! I'm curious to find out more on what happened in the fire. One thing I noticed, though, we're that there ...

Hi there! this parody was really clever and quite hilarious! there were a few times when you were slightly off-rythim, but that might just be me. (Cuz i chose to ...

hey there. just wanted to say i love your story. I am intrigued by Eden's little voice. is there a story behind him? is he some kind of spirit? there ...

this is my kind of story! I love how you used first person point of veiw, as no one really uses is much. I love your character, Josh, because we ...

hey there! this is TheFantasy14 for a reveiw! I think this shows a lot of promise. the idea is excellent, and i think with more characters, background, and plot elements ...

I loved this story to the last sentance! it was masterfully crafted and the style used fit the story to a tee. I think this has a lot of potential ...