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Thanks for the review and all of your kind words! I know it%u2019s pretty confusing lol, so I%u2019ll definitely take tempo and lack of information into consideration in the future. ...

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Thanks for the review! I found you insights really interesting and helpful.

Thanks for the review! The pointer about my second sentence was really helpful.

Thanks for the review! I'll definitely give those first couple of lines another look. And as for the last couple line, yes she literally leaves the ground, she just never ...

Thanks for the review. I think you made a lot a good points. You actually addressed a lot of my worries about this piece. I really liked the point about ...

Yeah I know, I was worried about the ambiguity of the language in the story and I guessed that a lot of the stuff might not be clear. The narrator ...

Thank you for the review ^_^. I can totally see what you're saying about the whole setting the scene thing. When you see it all in your head it's hard ...

Thanks for the review! I tried to fix the sentence you were talking about. I'm glad you liked it. ^_^

Thanks for the review! It's very blunt and straight to the point. It's refreshing to be called mediocre. At least I know I have work to do. I'll take note ...

Thanks for the review! ^_^ Commas have always been a struggle for me. Thanks for all the heads up. The "hand in hand" part felt awkward to me as well, ...

I get this feeling I shouldn't have laughed as much as I did. I strangely found this hilarious. Bravo, my friend. Absolute perfection!

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