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Obviously, thanks for the crit :) Sohini, Penguin - *^_^* I'll keep in mind your advice about some stanzas being childish (and that goes to the story itself, too). Cheers, ...

Well, first of all, they’re not exactly Michael’s thoughts, are they? I mean, kind of it is, but this is still first person narration. (Later on it’ll be first person, ...

I like it. I'm not good with poetry, so obviously I'm not able to give you any tips or anything, so I'll just say that I liked it :)

Elayna is pecular, yes? ^_^ She's great.

Alainna, As promised, I kept quiet with any eventual general comments until I read all that you posted on YWS. I hope that I managed to fulfill the vow ^_^ ...

O_o Elayna is very, very cool. Edit: (Not wanting to post anothe rpost...) Oooooh. (To below).

Yes, I am aware that this is seriosly not the best piece of writing. I am, really. Lol, and this project has been long since abandones... But it's still good ...

Fan, I love you, too. *Squeals* And yes, there will be more, probably 2 to 3 intsallments until I get bored with all this, lol. I usually do. Right now ...

PenguinAttack - thank you very very very much for the crit, and for your time! I really do appreciate you reading and critiquing this. First of all, I would like ...

Alainna, lol, thanks very much for the crit. For a very, very, very long time (since Februaru) no one critted it, and I kind of forgot about it. 'Spirit Caller', ...

No, I haven't read it. *Sighs* And there is a movie? Anyway, I am getting my father to buy it for me, so it will be read soon. I have ...

(Lilyyyyyyy! You're back! ~ eleinasari, here. Haven't seen you for ages and ages!) Ekhm. Just wanted to say that I agree about adoring the first ad being dissapointed afterwards. However, ...

I haven't read it, nor have I seen the movie. i promised myself a while ago that I will do either, or both, of the two.

Oh, and I wanted to add that teh snippet from Edward's POV (when he left Bella), was horrible. Truly made me wonder if that's how it looks before it goes ...

Very nice :)