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Babyspice, as you said, there already is a post on 'Twilight'. ^_^ Several (... yes, mine being one of them...) Anyway, if you want to post an opinion - post ...

Emily, Sorry for it taking me so long to get to - I just didn’t have much time in the last few day. Also, I see that no one has ...

Fan, So I finally got to this. ^_^ Sorry for the delay! As always, a line-by-line crit will come first, and then all the impressions, and likes and dislikes, and ...

Blithley, I see no one has of yer critted this piece, and I have the honor of being the first. ^_^ A line by line crit will, as always, be ...

Alainna, I’ll shamelessly copy and paste what Sumi wrote: Thank you for the PM and sorry about not 'tiquing immediately. Or, differently, I read it a while ago, just didn’t ...

Vernon, First of all (again), sorry for the delay on your crit. I was supposed to have it done days ago. Yeah, well. I don’t know if I’ll be able ...

Emily, So, here I am. As always, the line-by-line crit comes first, and the impressions/like/disliked and the such are saved for the end. Onward, then! Quote: I sat up slowly, ...

Fan, Promised I’d give you some impressions, and here I am. Sorry for the wait. ^_^ Anyway, as I scanned through the story, I noticed that improvements were made. Notices, ...

Kyte, I vaguely remember you telling me about ‘Phoenix’; here I am, investigating. What you posted is very extremely terrifyingly short, and it really is hard to crit it, but ...

Emily, Welcome to YWS, first of all. I suppose hundreds of people have already said that, but really, who cares? Lol. As always with my crits, line-by-line one will come ...

The use I am with poetry… I liked it. Now, I suppose, to not make this crit a waste of a post, I have to say why I liked it? ...

Sean Pendr, I will start my non-crit part by telling you off, *^_^* Writer’s note being writer’s not, it still ought to be correct from spelling-wise, grammar-wise, punctuation-wise and all ...

Aiva, I admit that I have not read what comes before. But since this is Chapter 1, all is well, yes? Yes? *Is still ashamed of self* Okay, here is ...

Hello room101, First of all, as I haven’t really seen you around yet, I would like to welcome you to YWS - this is a great, addictive (and terrifying, actually) ...

PenguinAttack, So I finally got to your story. Sorry it took so long. As always, the line-by-line, boring crit will come first, and impressions and the such will be found ...