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It's not the most original of tales, I feel like I've heard this idea a few times before. I don't really consider the idea that women dressing down in order ...

I think the tone of this story could be made a little clearer. I couldn't decide whether you meant it to be funny, ironic etc. There are a few spelling ...

I like this piece, its very intriguing, keeps the interest going and I can tell it has a lot more life in it. The opening is very smart and the ...

This is my kind of writing. I would change nothing of the story, its brutal, its hearfelt and its raw. Finally having enough of being trodden on, snapping and hitting ...

I just so happened to read this while listening to central park west by John Coltrane and it was a beautiful mix. In all honesty I have not found much ...

While this certainly is relateable to many of us, I find that it makes it less appealing than more. I don't know if I'm alone in this view, but writing ...

There are a few issues here with "excess baggage" and a few grammatical errors but its really not my thing to sit here marking peoples offerings like homework (not to ...

I think the grammatical things have all been covered so I won't go over that again. But I will say that I enjoyed the story, I always love a good ...

I like little snatches of stories like this. It's a little window into someones world that does need any further elaboration and doesn't leave the question "What happened next?" in ...

Judging by the tone of this story the outbreak is already well established and the humans have to find a way to coexist with the zombies, this could be a ...

With this piece you need to think about the message you're trying get get across to the reader. It trundles along at a slow pace and in places the lack ...