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He majhya little Krishna!!! Please babancha kaam hou de, ani account la paise jama hou de, please.... Please give me my guitar. Please yaar, tu natasha la hi gheun dila, ...

Thnk you for the review, BlackCatXx!!

Thank you for the review, Joe! :D

you cannot be partial. tu tujhya eka chlyala guitar gheun dila, pan tyachya bahini la ka naahi? bolo na bolo bolo... chup chap kyu baithe ho, are kuch bolte kyu ...

Mohita! Tujhi khooooooooooooooop aathwan yete re! :cry: Itkya lawkar ka challa gelas? :broken_heart:

Yaar, Luv ya! Thank you sooo much for the permission of guitar... Aata basss lawkarat lawkar yeu de yaar!! Imma dyein!!!! Please? Okay te sagla thik aahe, pan mala boardat ...

Yaaay! Let me know whenever you write it. :D

Yeah! thaz good! Just write it down and continue that...

Hmm, because he cannot leave the prince soo easily...

hmm... he gives permission, i see xD

Let me know when you edit it. xD

Heya Keepwriting!! This was very good. I loved the prologue. You have described everything very nicely. The dialogues are spread like spices. You have used good and heavy words all ...

Yaar, chashmyachi dayniy awastha jhaaliy!! anyways hot aalay... successful hoil ka...???? :?

Yaar, chashmyachi dayniy awastha jhaaliy!! anyways hot aalay... successful hoil ka...???? :?

Aik, Mohit, mi ek cardboard cha elctric guitar banawatay, mi te magnet war copper chi tar toroid sarki gundal li aahe, it should work. Please yaar, let my guitar work ...