Eros

Thanks for such inspiring words!! I'm glad you liked it... *Follows you*

I also get it that the poem fell short ... I will surely try my best and Edit this one and also keep this in mind when I write more ...

Thank you for the review!! :D I used Sui generis so as to not get "unique" repeated ... It's in the last stanza and then reviewers say avoid repeated use ...

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How does she reflect her lover's beauty? Why does she choose to share it with us? For this, actually the moon doesn't have its own light it's like reflecting her ...

Yeah! I will keep tagging you .... :D

Thank you SOOOO much for the comment ... Means a loooot to me. It's such a great inspiration to keep writing... I am glaad you liked it.... Thank you sooo ...

Yeahh. I also hate it... It feels so irritated lol

Yeah! But just getting time is not important... Should get ideas too .. :D Sometimes I really craaaave writing, but don't get any ideas... Lol

Yeah! But just getting time is not important... Should get ideas too .. :D Sometimes I really craaaave writing, but don't get any ideas... Lol

I'm glad you liked it! Actually I wanted to bring out the old camping memories of the readers :D and that's why I chose this theme... Other than that... Thanks ...

Yeah! I edited water and thirsty line, ALSO edited the trees blocking the sunlight thing. Thank you so much for helping me improve! Thank you so much for this awesome ...

Yeah yeah! Wounded.... Loool actually I was craving to write something since a few days. And I got idea today. And I was getting so late to the tuitions... And ...

Welcome! :D

Oh ...yes. Love this story... A few nitpicks though, Viper spun around only to come face to face with Quake again. Viper let out a nervouschuckle. Quake turned around and ...