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ErikaHale

  • Short Story » Humor, Narrative Re: Randy

    Thank you so much for your review! I get the opinion of wanting a broader story with more details but I'm scared that if I expand on the character of ...

    Feb 25, 2020
  • Short Story » Humor, Narrative Re: Randy

    Thank you so much for your review! I wanted to leave the end open, sort of as a way to let the reader decide what they should do with that ...

    Feb 25, 2020
  • Short Story » Humor, Narrative Re: Randy

    Wow, this was an incredibly insightful review! Thank you so much! And yeah, I'll definitely look into fixing those dialogue tags. I love the way that you analyzed the story, ...

    Feb 25, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Snow Queen (Chapter 3)

    Hello there, Rebecca! First of all, welcome to YWS! (Lovely avatar, by the way) and thank you for your review! I am honored to be the recipient of your very ...

    Sep 10, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Snow Queen (Chapter 2)

    Dearest Mrs Jennings, Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad that you are rooting for Sonya, since she is in fact the hero of this story. I'm sorry ...

    Sep 6, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Snow Queen (Chapter 1)

    Dear Mrs. Jennings, Thank you for your support and for your feedback! I didn't realize that the language was too eloquent. I'll make sure to work on that :) Two ...

    Sep 5, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Snow Queen (Chapter 1)

    Hello there, Tyler! First of all, welcome back and thank you for your wonderful review! I appreciate all the feedback that you gave me, since you pointed out many details ...

    Sep 5, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Snow Queen (Chapter 3)

    Dearest EternalRain, Thank you so much for being the first one to review this chapter :) ! And thank you for the dialogue tip, I always get confused regarding that ...

    Sep 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Snow Queen (Chapter 2)

    Dearest felistia, Thank you so much for your review! I'm pleased that you like where the story is headed and that you find the characters interesting. As to Sonya's age, ...

    Sep 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Snow Queen (Chapter 2)

    Hello again, EternalRain! Thank you so much for keeping up with the story, and I'm glad that you like where it is going! I was afraid that it wasn't clear ...

    Sep 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Snow Queen (Chapter 1)

    Dearest EternalRain, Thank you so much for your review! I'll make sure to take those helpful insights into account and correct those annoying grammar mistakes. Also, the thought that the ...

    Sep 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Snow Queen (Chapter 2)

    Dear Lightsong, First of all, lovely avatar! (I'm a huge fan of Dreamwork's 'The Guardians,' especially Sandy.) Secondly, thank you so much for your wonderful review! I've never had one ...

    Sep 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Realistic Re: The Ice Dragon

    Thank you so much Felistia! I'll check them out right away!

    Sep 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Snow Queen (Chapter 1)

    Dear LadyEvvy, Thank you so much for reviewing my story! I tend to keep my first chapters short, and I promise they will get longer as the story progresses. I ...

    Sep 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Snow Queen (Chapter 1)

    Dearest Felistia, Thank you so much for your review! I'm extremely sorry if I didn't make it clear that Sonya was quoting Napoleon. I thought it would be a subtle ...

    Sep 3, 2016


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