EricJ9609

Attrition means to whiter away gradually or to slowly wear piece by piece and i thought that it was used best for the central theme of the poem but thank ...

I really appreciate the review! and honestly a major part of my posting this was for punctuation ha. It has been so long since i have written poetry that i ...

Hey Gummy! I appreciate the review and for starters i do agree with your change. I do not write poetry often and it is really not my strong suite. As ...