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Re: The Diary of the Sluttiest Virgin - Chapter 2
This will be a review on both the previous chapter, as well as this one. Well, if you have read my previous reviews you will gather that I prize honesty, ...
Aug 16, 2013 -
Re: Chapter one Soul Wolf
All I am going to say is that before you even write something down, you must learn how to construct a sentence. You must learn what the purpose of a ...
Aug 14, 2013 -
Re: Anecdote Worthy Travels
Now, to begin, if you have read my other reviews you will gather, easily I might add, that I do not concern myself with any grammatical errors, unless they affect ...
Aug 14, 2013 -
Re: Unfrozen ~ Prologue
Firstly, I will fringe slightly upon one of my own principles by saying that for the most part your prose is entirely devoid of errors; however, at the beginning there ...
Aug 10, 2013 -
Re: A Short Drop and a Sudden Stop
Note: This is a general review of the entirety of your supplied writings. This was well written. I enjoyed the prose and the plot was interesting. However may I ask ...
Aug 8, 2013 -
Re: Nightmare-Prologue
It is obvious from this work that you need a substantial amount of lessons, not only in grammar, but punctuation and editing. The thing is, is that I prize honesty. ...
Aug 8, 2013 -
Re: Vulpeculae
Hello, I am Equivocal, and I believe that you have something quite special here. I have been on this website many times, and I have sifted through the illiterate masses. ...
Aug 8, 2013 -
Re: Life
Frankly, though I respect your endeavoring in such an art. This poem is merely satisfactory, that is not to say that it is devoid of opportunity. To begin, my review, ...
Aug 8, 2013
