EpicHumiliation

Hmm.. hehe I don't get it either but I really just enjoyed anyway for some reason. :P Those little rhyming things are fun to me. And, I really don't have ...

I agree with AlyssaKyle. It's like a huge giant cliff hanger and leaves a lot of open questions. But, I do like your wording. I'm weird probably just like a ...

Hmm... I agree with Cassie with the how fast the story seemed to transition around so fast. I found myself always wondering what was going on, but on the whole. ...

Hmm... well, when I was reading this, for someone reason I had a flash back to the band Disturbed. -shrugs- but anywho, I liked the ending of this and I ...

Wow, I was expecting something not that great actually. Thanks for making my assumption totally and embarrassingly wrong! Awesome, I really like songs like this. Agression and aditude.... always great

Hmm.. interesting. To be honesty, I've never read over a song that this kind of style. It's not that I don't like it though. Don't get that assumption, I think ...

Oh, my word. That was amazingly well written. And, I can't even describe how intrigued I was with each new sentence and.. I mean.... I'm a little speechless after reading ...

Very touching story. It really entranced me and drew me into it. I was just so amazed and awed to read on and on. You have a certain style of ...

Wow and at first I thought I was going to read just a conversation and actually got a story! Amazing. I loved it. :) I would definitely like to read ...

Mostly, all that I can say is... wow. Amazing. I most definitely would like to read more of your work. I really love the way you use words and how ...

Hmm.. I like this. I really do. Great poetry. =) hmm... quadruple thumbs up! :D Oh, and I agree. Poems don't really have a to have a rhyming theme, write ...

Wow... This was great. I really liked it. And it definitely leaves you wondering about the whole thing, which is awesome! =) I also agree with the one just being ...