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Re: Angelsea I: The Last Sentinel (posted a bit of ch 2)
Tell ya what, I'm not too proud to admit a mistake. I'll give you the benefit of the doubt, maybe I should have posted the positive things; however, there are ...
Feb 17, 2007 -
Re: Angelsea I: The Last Sentinel (posted a bit of ch 2)
Until now, I have yet to type the word naive. I apologize for critiquing it. I'm not trying to start a bash war here, so I'm hoping (assuming) that we ...
Feb 17, 2007 -
Re: Inevitabilities - Chapter One
Well, the fact that it hasn't been up 24 hours could have something to do with the lack of critiques. ;) Thanks for the comments guys.
Feb 16, 2007 -
Re: Mystification
I'll definitely take that into consideratoin; however, I was aiming for the complexity of the words. The diction is this poem was aimed to make the reader think - it's ...
Jan 27, 2007