EnderFlash

(Woah, you review fast... I was surprised to see the influx of notifications xD) Anyways, I'll be going through them all. I apologize for the fish-spear-thing... This is my first ...

Ah, thanks so much! :> I've never actually read that book series, but I should go check it out sometime. You made my day (night?), and now it is time ...

Why, thank you! I'm glad it turned out well, and thanks for the review! (I fixed that little grammar mistake)

Thank you! I'll consider taking the parentheses out, then. They were more an experimental thing since I don't use them often. Same about the paragraph. I was debating whether to ...

xD Good luck with your homework! I shelved a bunch of other stuff to impulse-write this, in fact. ... Better get back to finishing English.

[Notes 3.] Oh, I did indeed interpret that wrong. I thought the 'for' meant that they didn't have any homework due tomorrow, and that threw me off because it was ...

Yeah, I imagined that it wasn't the one. It would've been funny (and very despairing) of you to make the scenarios the ending point. You wouldn't, though.

Super late reply, go! I kind of forgot about answering this, hehe... Yeah, sorry. [Comments #1]. Oh, that! I didn't automatically connect the two, sorry. It's good to have things ...

Huh. I usually insert another character's turn so that it's easier, but maybe that's because I've never had the situation where I need massive explanations (bc who needs explanations in ...

It's a unique way to discover this Christmas song, I'll say, and although I've never played a Sonic game, I know the characters and I found it entertaining. Noice! My ...

I wrote 'dad'. Kill me. I meant 'day'.

Woah, this is a big one! Don't worry, I read it all, with great appreciation, I may add. These are things to keep in mind as I write the story ...

Thanks for the review! I'm glad to see that you enjoyed this chapter, and I'll be sure to keep your advice in mind, since more of this type of stuff ...

It's fine to address my 'critiques'- we all have different ways of writing and these are just from my viewpoint. In fact, I'm glad you do! I'm less confused about ...

You are delusional.