EnchantressMuffin

This updated version is a lot better, but I think something needs to be pointed out. Technically, if there was a bus on the rampage, the cops would not go ...

Since everyone seems to be posting and telling how much they liked it: I didn't. Muffin

I'd critique it, but I can't find anything wrong with it, other than a couple of missing commas. Is it too late to do it, anyway? Muffin

I've read that book. I love it! I always promise myself when I come up towards the ending I won't cry, and yet I always do, dangit! Peace, love, chocolate, ...

This sounds so cute! I love cat stories. Unless the cat dies--then I hate it.

Ooh... cool sounding book. Next time I go to the bookstore I'll see if I can find it.

Ooh... my sister read this book. She didn't exactly like it... Actually she may have hated it. But still, it sounds pretty nifty. I also really like the cover. I ...

Which one? Both? What did I figure out?

Ethan is from ctrl-alt-del. Great, isn't that nice for Ethan. I'm so proud of him. ...Would you mind telling me what on earth ctrl-alt-del is? (And yes, I know it ...

I like this! It's all part of the great enigma that is Lindsay. Awesome! It didn't strike me as particularly poemish, but then, what do I know? Peace, love, chocolate, ...

Overall, this was a rather dull, telly poem. There's nothing here that makes me like this poem, and it was only because it was short that I could read it ...

Thanks for all the critiques, guys. I trimmed it a little bit--took out the lines that had less relevance to the next line and so forth--but as I like it ...

"Awed" is a word, but not in that context. Muff

Um... what? I assume this is about a relationship, but I read it four times over and still don't get it. What am I missing?? I apologize for my idiocy. ...

Ooh, I like this, especially the "onyx coils poised to strike" bit. Good stuff. I think, yeah, you're right, it can stand alone. Muffin