Empress

Thanks for your review! Yep, all really useful points :) Someone else mentioned about the school info as well so I'll deal with that :) And that's interesting that you're ...

Chapter 3 is up :)

Heya, thanks so much for your review! Yeah the prologue is intended to give you a glimpse into the whole point of the entire series (5 books). But don't worry, ...

Thanks so much for your review! And those are all great points! Very useful :) Soz, I think waves lapping are a bit of a cliche! And yeah I know ...

Hi again, thanks for another review :) And again, thanks for picking up on those silly errors!

Wow thanks for reading, and for your kind words :)

Hiya, thanks for such kind words :) And I hate when those kind of mistakes slip under my radar. Stupid really, not putting a question mark at the end of ...

Hahaha don't worry I love your reviews! They're just so useful! Yep, now you point them out, I'm starting to realise the embarrassingly vast amount of ellipses... ;) As well ...

No problem! :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing! And good points, I'll cut down some of the longer sentences (and I'm quite fond of using the odd incomplete sentence for effect!) Thanks for ...

Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing! Great compliments! And yeah I love Isaac Asimov's writing, thanks for even comparing this to his! (But 'millennia' is the plural of 'millennium', ...

No problem :) And yeah it is more like hard to please so that's good :)

Wow I love the sound of all this! Your vision of the adapted Colosseum sounds amazing! Yep, I'd definitely love to read more! :)

Wow thanks for such a great compliment :)

Wow, I'm sorry to here that, but the poem is truly lovely. And well done for translating it so perfectly from Croatian, I had no idea!