Emmzziee

Thank you so much, AnimalQueen! ^_^ It's so nice of you to say so! And lovely to hear. If there's anything you want a review on, just let me know, ...

Thank you, Eros ^_^ I appreciate it!

Thank you so much, tgirly! I really appreciate the kind review! This is intended to be a picture book, so the 'picture' part was just a quick reminder for me. ...

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Thanks for your kind review ^_^

Thanks for the info about parenthesis and threading! So you're saying the story is ok, but I haven't edited it well enough, right? That's really good to know; thanks. Editing ...

Really great poem, Katja. :)

Hi, Killeham; I do like curry, but you can call me Emma next time ;) thanks for the thoughtful review! Overall, did you follow it ok and find the ending ...

Thank you, Curry! :D I appreciate it!!

Thanks, Del :) great review and very helpful. Did you understand the ending ok?

Aw, shucks. Thanks, Aulyasela. I'm blushing :)

Woah o_O I was way off. Ha ha! I see it now! *ducks head in embarrassment*

Shira gritted her teeth and clenched her fists. The icy wind whipped at her face, sending her short, charcoal black hair into her eyes and SLICING**** through her clothes, chilling ...

PLEASE, SOMEBODY, TELL ME THAT YOU UNDERSTOOD THIS ;D NOBODY understands my poetry anymore. LOL, Emmzziee xD!!

Ah. Okay. Thank you for all of your suggestions. This was the first poem that I've ever written in this sort of format, and is also the very first poem ...