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Re: Different
I know what you mean about the word pad and I could usually tell when it was intentional (and those times I liked it). About the character and last paragraph: ...
Aug 15, 2013 -
Re: With a Flick of His Wand (Part 1)
Hi! I'm very happy to hear your feedback! I will try and incorporate your ideas into my next draft!
Aug 8, 2013 -
Re: With a Flick of His Wand (Part 1)
I really liked your suggestions and I think they will make this story better! In my next draft I will try and develop the characters more (it has always kind ...
Aug 8, 2013 -
Re: With a Flick of His Wand (Part 1)
Thank you!! I really appreciate the positive feedback!
Aug 8, 2013