EmmaJane

SUUZZZ! You don't mind me calling you that, do you? YOU POSTED A NEW CHAPTER! Yes, caps are necessary. Of course they are. C: I'd forgotten how funny Crys was! ...

Ahh! Ahhh! I remember this!! Ahem, well, the first paragraph is still gripping. I especially love the repetition of "six years". Very dramatic. Your MC tends to rely on the ...

So, I got bored with work and decided to look on YWS for something to read (because I need to get back into the habit of reading and reviewing) and ...

Uh oh. I just got off work again... So I apologise in advance if I'm too much of a monster here. ;D Rawr. I'm gonna make pretty colours with this ...

Hi Stargazer! I'm here to review your story this fine evening. C: 1. Okay, first things first. Presentation. When I clicked on to this story, all I saw was this ...

Tanyaaa! Yay! I'm first! Second time lucky, huh? I'd done a review but the bloody internet lost it when I clicked 'submit'. Let's just say i am not amused at ...

Hi Tanya! Sorry I'm late, but gosh, if you write another short story, or anything else, please do PM me again! of all the short stories I've read, this has ...

Hi Spitfire! Sorry I'm late! Woohoo! 'Nother chapter. Procrastinating? Well, I can wait, just as long as you don't stop writing! ;P Anyways, first off, and like some others, I ...

Hi Spike! I got your PM and while I'm useless with poems, I just love the message behind your words, so I thought I owed you a review! Well ... ...

Have you ever had that terrifying dream where you run and you run, but it’s never fast enough to evade the monster chasing you? That’s me right now, except your ...

Hi Sillyducky (I love your user name, by the way!). I'm here to review! C: My, my, your prologue was certainly gripping. It was done very well, especially the first ...

Hiya Spitfire! Sorry for the reviewing delay! I was around a friend's and didn't want to do it on my phone! :P The first thing that jumped out at me, ...

LOVED this chapter. And yes, the caps are entirely necessary. ;D You've got so many scenes in here that I really adore. Like the scene where they nearly kissed, sorry ...

Hi Kyllorac! I really enjoy your story! I think it's partly the language you use, but mostly I just love the dialogue between the prince and the fox. It's very ...

Same as the others. This isn't really a critique, but an oh-my-gosh-that-was-really-great kind of review. The dialogue was my favourite. And your characters were very well established, especially the