Emma

Yeah, I was having trouble with that bit. So I changed it to yours! Which was mine... 8-[

Lmao! This is funny. xD ...Wait... Is this meant to be funny? I just like it.

Thank you! Oh I could hug you right now. Really. I have this thing about commas, maybe I like them too much... I find it hard when I'm trying to ...

I liked it. That is my new fave song lyrics. I want to hear it now.

Aaah, got you now. Sounds fun.

It's pretty good. It does flow really nicely, everything was well described which I thought was really good. The only problem is - Is that your main character sounds a ...

That is really sweet. It is kind of different to what I normally read - But it is so perfect. Nice.

... I've never... Wished I had though.. That would be the best dream ever. :twisted: Yeah, but it wouldn't be me with the razor and the blood. It would be ...

...She was just saying...

That was so sad. I really feel sorry for Danny and Mandie. It was really good and it made me want to read on because I wanted to know WHAT ...

Wow, that was really good! Its nice they got a baby in the end! God, I'm so bad at critiquing work. :roll: I just liked it.

Oh thankyou my dear child.... It was cool? Now that is something you don't hear in my stories...

Damn.... :P

Hehe, very nice work! xD

Dunno? O.o