Emma

That is very good! Keep it up! And thats all I have to say, apart from: Try making it a bit longer! :D

Thanx! Im sooo proud of that lol! Which Im normally never proud of anything! :D

Its quite good. It took me a long time to read it though! :P

Its touching. And yes, start a new line after someone is speaking. But thats it... Its quite amazing!

Its very good. I have to agree with sam its just sooo kewl! I would love to read more of your work.

It is really kool! I liked it!

Its good! So is that your voice?!

Yer, this is actullay quite good.

Thanks, I hope you liked it! I wow, this is like my best work! And if it is then I must be bad!

Okay, thanks. I'm that lazy, I can never be bothered to! :P

Sorry then.

Its a very good story. Sorry but I will have to demand you to write more!

Sorry, But I really liked your Eternity stories. I think you should carry on. And yes, this was good but like kate, it is a bit bumpy. Also, this is ...

A 'B'?! Thats was execellent!

Thats soo... I can't describe it, peaceful and calm. If you turned that into a book, you'd sure be the worlds best seller.