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Re: "Addicted" Part one
The story was pretty good. Maybe a little confusing. The plot seemed a little unreal at this bit. I stopped crying when he turned back around to talk to me. ...
Oct 7, 2005 -
Re: Lord of The Rings or Harry Potter?
Brandan no offense but Witch Craft, we are not in the middle ages.(i wish) We do not persecute witch craft so get to the now already jeeze. Now to say ...
Sep 30, 2005 -
Re: i slit my wrists for Jesus
Wow... That was evil, yet fun. (Yeah, if you notice I have a very sick sense of humour) It was described quite well, and if were to write a book ...
Sep 29, 2005 -
Re: Naked fires in empty fields
This is good, but really hard to read. I had to break it down so I was able to read it. After you use those dots - you use a ...
Sep 26, 2005 -
Re: Our Lord's Son
That's interesting Sureal very interesting, but it seems to short, it looks like an extract from a longer story, get me drift. Who is the person who says this, that's ...
Sep 24, 2005 -
Re: Little Kids and lots of big questions
#5 - Yes they do. Never touch girls. They're evil. NO THEY ARE NOT AND NO THEY DO NOT Boys do ;)
Sep 14, 2005 -
Re: WARNING (concerning give me a reason)
Keep putting up the stories, if you have noticed you can see how many people who have went into your post. They must of red it, but just never commented ...
Sep 13, 2005 -
Re: Chapter 1-2 - A Sentence of A New Life
Yes, what Sam said and TBR. It was described pretty well, but I don't get this with the solider and the girl. Do they know each other? Or does the ...
Sep 12, 2005 -
Re: Untitled still
Its pretty good, but I don't like the bit with the describing of Jan, I don't know... I would like to know this girl in more time, slowly. In the ...
Sep 8, 2005 -
Re: Coming
Wow, that is pretty good and I would like to know what is wrong with the man, poor thing. I wish I could help you, but to me you are ...
Sep 6, 2005 -
Re: Vision In Black Nail Polish [need guys opinion]
That is really good! But Also.... “The coffee place, down there,” I pointed to the joint and carried on, “So I was walking home and I saw him in an ...
Sep 4, 2005 -
Re: can't you see my heart is broken
This is pretty good, honestly. Though you confused me on the last bit... There was just lots of swearing, and on the first bit I had no idea what you ...
Aug 31, 2005 -
Re: Life Drawing: An Excuse to see Naked People
Really good liz love you but i ws did not read this at school, because i i don't know well you get the drift OKAY FONTROY!! I really had enough ...
Aug 19, 2005 -
Re: Flatulence. The Truth.
Eh, whilst we're here: Sitting in a school assembaly. The teacher has just stopped talking, when, all of a sudden one of my friends let it rip. And this wasn't ...
Aug 15, 2005 -
Re: Night of the Vampires
Ah a newbie. Welcome, there is a few things I see in this story that concern me. The first is the number of weapons. They have a Katana, Whip, and ...
Aug 15, 2005