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Re: I remember...
Such incredible imagery! Great key points portrayed with experience and reminiscing. Very well written, also. Overall the emotion was conveyed so movingly and your poem touched me.
Apr 18, 2017 -
Re: Repetoire
Very well written and great concept!
Apr 18, 2017 -
Re: Prologue, Chapter 1
So far, you have established a gripping plot. I would recommend, however, you introduce more characters to make the plot more elaborate.
Nov 28, 2016 -
Re: Humanity
Very relevant message. I would suggest you be more descriptive. However, I enjoyed your optimistic ending. :)
Nov 23, 2016 -
Re: Say I Never Mattered
My only critique would be to extend the length! You have a great premise I think you can really elaborate and add even more power onto. Overall, I could really ...
Nov 22, 2016 -
Re: You Are An Image
Thank you so much! I appreciate your feedback! (:
Nov 20, 2016