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Emilia


  • Short Story » Horror, Spiritual
    Re: A Sweet Game of Suicide

    Wow... You see, I like to read about interesting characters, not necessarily good-hearted ones all the time. That's what keeps people wanting to read more, because the odd ones out ...

    Jan 3, 2015

  • Poetry » General, Politics
    Re: Gaia

    I think about this on the daily but you actually put it into words. I had to read it twice to find the rhymes, which I thought was good because ...

    Dec 31, 2014

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Action / Adventure
    Re: deleted

    This is one of my favorite poems now! I'm usually iffy about rhymes, but yours don't sound cheesy, they're sophisticated. What I took from this poem is that somebody may ...

    Dec 31, 2014

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: On Life

    I like this overall because most poems about life are either depressing or positively reminiscent. This one manages to be both because most people are able to say that they ...

    Dec 30, 2014

  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire
    Re: Everything is always fal li ng apa rt .

    I like the contrast between each line. Almost every news report about a tragedy is the same and the sentiment that goes into it isn't anywhere near how the friends ...

    Dec 28, 2014

  • Poetry » Humor, General
    Re: Writer's Block

    I can see this being published among pieces with all kinds of tones. It's mostly a good laugh if you don't know what you're getting into a casual reader. That's ...

    Dec 28, 2014

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction
    Re: Broken Chapter 1

    This was a fun piece that still required thought to it. I like that, and the way it uses humor throughout it. I enjoyed the beginning because it could be ...

    Dec 28, 2014


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