Emerson

I changed the rating of this poem to R. Please, you don't have to rate things all of the time, but especially if it is R content, rate your work!

Moved to Other Fiction.

Notes: Thanks for the critiques! If you don't notice any major changes in the previous, it's because I'm keeping them to edit when I'm all done, heh. I can only ...

Sorry I'm doing this in two parts... On the other side of the city another woman looked out of her window. She could feel the darkness, could almost see it. ...

Sorry to fill you down with not-critiques. I removed your full name from the post as well. Remember, people can find you if you put your whole name online! Be ...

Moved to other fiction. You don't post your own works here, love. :D

I think this is in the wrong place? So I'm going to move it to Other Fiction. If you want it somewhere else, just say so! :D

*moved to other poetry*

Finally went through and fixed up a few things. There were certain parts mentioned that I'm not sure how to clear up at the moment, but will stare at after ...

I changed the rating to PG-13 because of the language and I changed your title so it wasn't all caps.

I hadn't read that one before, but it is a beautiful poem... I added the dash because Dickinson always seems to end lines with a dash. It's one of those ...

It's still really worth reading even if you have already seen the film. I suppose, just not the whole. The first part, and Robbie in war is good. All the ...

"Thank god for endorphine" Endorphins. Don't confuse it with morphine.

Yep, Cecilia! Yeah, I could see how revealing the truth to the characters would make good shock value, but as a reader, I just felt like I had been lied ...

To me, falling short could even be an 11/10. And I do mention that it's a play. Do you have really high standards, or just a strange scale? :lol: Yes, ...