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Re: Shut the Hell Up, Jiminy
It does actually. Helps when people actually reads description *thwaps own silly head*
Thu Jul 10, 2014 8:11 pm -
Re: Shut the Hell Up, Jiminy
OMD. I read: "boy took" as toy box. -massive facepalm- I am an idiot sowwy
Thu Jul 10, 2014 8:05 pm -
Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 6: Land of Magic
Alright. Yeah, I might check it out. :D
Thu Jul 10, 2014 6:11 pm -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Head of Reality
Ha ha. Ok. XD
Thu Jul 10, 2014 9:47 am -
Re: The Light Doesn't Shine Here (chapter one)
Ah, I was gonna read this chapter but there's nothing here, I did look at it for you, but it appears I'm too late. Hope it's back soon.
Wed Jul 09, 2014 10:54 pm -
Re: A Song Named Alice Chapter 3 ~updating~
Ohhhhhhhh. I missed the reference completely. That would explain it.
Wed Jul 09, 2014 10:54 pm -
Re: Ordinary Days and Extraordinary Nights, Installment One
Agreed. Well done though :D
Wed Jul 09, 2014 10:44 pm -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 68
YAY
Wed Jul 09, 2014 5:27 pm -
Re: Hungover
Make up a more original story about someone being drunk and what happens to them. Make it funny, include dialogue, put a stronger voice in the character. Anything! But it ...
Wed Jul 09, 2014 5:27 pm -
Re: A Song Named Alice Chapter 3 ~updating~
Errrr. No, it says novel/chapter, I meant the title of your work is: A Song Named Alice. Why is it called that? XD
Wed Jul 09, 2014 5:26 pm -
Re: STOP (a checklist)
D'awww thanks so much for the kind reviews :D Glad you like my works so much. :) *huggles* As for the bullies...pfft. You seem lovely ;)
Tue Jul 08, 2014 10:35 pm -
Re: She Couldn't Be Good
the "bend" is a colloquial way of saying "going mad" There isn't supposed to be punctuation, it's like unpunctuated thoughts. :D Glad you liked it. XD
Tue Jul 08, 2014 10:30 pm -
Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 3: Son of Aredes (P2)
WOW. Congratulations. *bows to literary royalty* XD
Tue Jul 08, 2014 10:29 pm -
Re: Machiavelli's "The Art Of War" - an essay on it, part 2.
I mean... break down the massive chunks and explain them more fully. So the reader has time to understand "digest" one point before you move onto the next one. XD
Tue Jul 08, 2014 9:51 pm -
Re: chapter 2 of life after him
It does. I guessed as much, but just wanted to be sure.
Tue Jul 08, 2014 5:43 pm