EmeraldEyes

It does actually. Helps when people actually reads description *thwaps own silly head*

OMD. I read: "boy took" as toy box. -massive facepalm- I am an idiot sowwy

Alright. Yeah, I might check it out. :D

Ha ha. Ok. XD

Ah, I was gonna read this chapter but there's nothing here, I did look at it for you, but it appears I'm too late. Hope it's back soon.

Ohhhhhhhh. I missed the reference completely. That would explain it.

Agreed. Well done though :D

YAY

Make up a more original story about someone being drunk and what happens to them. Make it funny, include dialogue, put a stronger voice in the character. Anything! But it ...

Errrr. No, it says novel/chapter, I meant the title of your work is: A Song Named Alice. Why is it called that? XD

D'awww thanks so much for the kind reviews :D Glad you like my works so much. :) *huggles* As for the bullies...pfft. You seem lovely ;)

the "bend" is a colloquial way of saying "going mad" There isn't supposed to be punctuation, it's like unpunctuated thoughts. :D Glad you liked it. XD

WOW. Congratulations. *bows to literary royalty* XD

I mean... break down the massive chunks and explain them more fully. So the reader has time to understand "digest" one point before you move onto the next one. XD

It does. I guessed as much, but just wanted to be sure.