EmeraldEyes

Hi. So points about this work: - it was very long, I think it was too long. - It seemed like a novel chapter, but i wasn't sure, it could ...

Hi. So this is avery sad story, but I like the way you have tried to make it seem real. Especially this part, really pulls on the emotional strings: The ...

Hi. I think I remember reading a previous part of this. How do I know? Because I remember the character names! That is definitely a good sign that your story ...

Hi This work was very frantic. I liked the repetition and the introductory sound of the first stanza: Blood everywhere, another life gone. Blood everywhere, another one born. Antagonism and ...

Hello. I'm not exactly sure what this work was, but it seemed like a bit of a rant. Given the form it takes I think it would be better suited ...

Hi. So contrary to your previous work I kinda found this a bit predcitable. The characters were miserable, well characterised but kind of depressing. The ending of the work leaves ...

Hi. I enjoy reading your works. And this is another to add to the list. XD It's an interesting topic to choose to write about. My favourite is this line: ...

Hi. So this is your first work.... and it is a very good start! XD Hee hee What Went Well 1. The repetition and variation in the language was interesting ...

Hi. This is a very arty work. I could tell by the title and the use of a picture. Clearly, it is intended to be quite dark. :) The writing ...

Hi. So you have a very casual tone to your writing. It's conversational and friendly to read. If that makes sense XD What Went Well 1. i like the fact ...

LOL I didn't understand what the joke was going to be until I go to the end. I was surprised actually, by how clever this was XD Kudos. I think ...

Hi. I can see you've done something very interesting with your ideas here, but I'm not exactly sure how I would describe it. Points: - The work is too long, ...

I have to say, because I noticed this: THE FACT THAT YOUR AVATAR BLINKS IS THE CREEPIEST THING I HAVE EVER SEEN IN MY LIFE! EWWW. XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD Now for the ...

Hello. Well first of all this is epic. For two reasons: 1. Detail 2. Length Hee hee Points: -Good character names: Azar and Viknor sound very oldy-worldy XD - Nice ...

Yes I will read your novel! XD Hey. I'm not exactly sure what type of work this was. Or I wasn't. And then I understood that this was a preview. ...