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Re: Cloudy Dirt, Kneedy Skies
I love the title of your poem,its kinda difficult for me to grasp. the poem has strong imagery which opens our eyes to the predicament of the persona.e.g,chain-link fences,and you ...
Sep 23, 2015 -
Re: Shaving
despite being hilarious but it has a strong message embedded therein. I like writers that hold aesthetic in one hand and truth in the other hand as they explore the ...
Sep 22, 2015 -
Re: Open Wound
open wound kinda of striking title for such tragic-romantic poem.the persona desire from the fellow opening his wound is not certain ,from the beginning you will think he does not ...
Sep 22, 2015 -
Re: Our Dream
the rhythm of the poem is good .comparing apology to a glass is very nice but this to the persona is nor enough which is ironical. the poem is filled ...
Sep 14, 2015
