-
Re: You Know You Have a Crush When....
Awwwwwwwwww! This is the best love poem I've read In a while! I'm not buttering you up. This is really good. You spoke the language of crushes everywhere! Brilliant word ...
Aug 3, 2012 -
Re: My Own Girl
I love the beginning uncertainty, the self-sacrificial doubt, the final acceptance at the end. This is the poem for all girls, both big and thin. This poem will speak to ...
Aug 3, 2012 -
Re: Brielle, I remembered you today.
Wow, this is really powerful! I am amazed at the emotions displayed here. Regret, sadness, etc. this is a really amazing work. I really cannot suggest anything to make it ...
Aug 1, 2012 -
Re: A Whispered Lullaby
This Is a very good poem! I quite enjoy the word choice. It created an image of serenity. I just have one thing: you can elaborate easily to make this ...
Aug 1, 2012 -
Re: Now and Forever
Wow this is beautiful! Your pOetry really spoke to me in a way i cant describe. Ive been through this too much and i know your emotions. Three things i ...
Jul 16, 2012 -
Re: maybe tomorrow
This is beautiful poetry that really is full of emtions! The fluency is key and the wording is immaculate! Great work!
Jul 16, 2012