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Emberpenner

  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: You Know You Have a Crush When....

    Awwwwwwwwww! This is the best love poem I've read In a while! I'm not buttering you up. This is really good. You spoke the language of crushes everywhere! Brilliant word ...

    Aug 3, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: My Own Girl

    I love the beginning uncertainty, the self-sacrificial doubt, the final acceptance at the end. This is the poem for all girls, both big and thin. This poem will speak to ...

    Aug 3, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Brielle, I remembered you today.

    Wow, this is really powerful! I am amazed at the emotions displayed here. Regret, sadness, etc. this is a really amazing work. I really cannot suggest anything to make it ...

    Aug 1, 2012
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: A Whispered Lullaby

    This Is a very good poem! I quite enjoy the word choice. It created an image of serenity. I just have one thing: you can elaborate easily to make this ...

    Aug 1, 2012
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Other Re: Now and Forever

    Wow this is beautiful! Your pOetry really spoke to me in a way i cant describe. Ive been through this too much and i know your emotions. Three things i ...

    Jul 16, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: maybe tomorrow

    This is beautiful poetry that really is full of emtions! The fluency is key and the wording is immaculate! Great work!

    Jul 16, 2012


That awkward moment when you jump out a window because your friend jumped out a window, then you remember that your other friend can fly.
— Rick Riordan, The Ship of the Dead