Ember

Wow, this was very intriguing. I'm not a very religious person, but it sounds like you take pride in your religion and that's pretty awesome! :D I really liked how ...

I think you came on strong, but a little too strong. You explained the main conflict in the first few paragraphs of the story. I know that you must be ...

I found this to be a great piece of work! It had wonderful descriptions and the way you described the characters was very vivid. I could almost feel Hades' voice ...

Your style reminds me very much of Dave Eggers or David Sedaris, in the witty aspect. I really liked the way you wrote it! Sadly, though, I am not a ...

I thought this poem was very beautiful- you created this character, and you expressed his dream to fly so nicely. How he goes through different stages of his life reminds ...

This was a very descriptive piece. You painted each scene intricately, and I liked that about the story. What I didn't quite understand was that the scene that you picked ...