EmBird

Thank you for the advice. I'm going do a second draft and use the advice you have given. As for the italics, I'm not sure really, I didn't think or ...

Hi Omniyus, Thank you so much for taking the time to review this poem. The poem is latin, Lucem Videret actually means 'see the light'. I hope to write more ...

Thanks for the comments Soulkana, I appreciate the time you have taken to read the poem. This is a first draft, I can only write when my emotions are running ...