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Love is so hard :(

Oh my gosh. That was so good. I loved the rollercoaster feel, the anticipation, and how quickly it changed. Reading this poem was like seeing the sky change from blue ...

Thank you! I'm so glad you like my poems. I'm actually surprised you like part 2 better- I thought part 1 was better (probably just author bias). Now that you've ...

Thank you so much for your review and your helpful comments! You're totally right, now that I look back at it, the last line of the first stanza is weird ...

It's fine! America is stupid :)

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So, I made comments on your piece based on the stanza and line number. If it says S1, L4, that means Stanza 1, Line 4. I counted the line “you ...

Hey sasha_bumble_bee! I really enjoyed reading the first chapter of your novel. I love the complex relationships you have already set up, and the suspense surrounding the main character. I ...

Hey sasha_bumble_bee! I really enjoyed reading the first chapter of your novel. I love the complex relationships you have already set up, and the suspense surrounding the main character. I ...

Thank you!!

Thank you for the corrections! They are very helpful.

This is such a good piece!