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  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Waiting For the Sky to Collapse

    Thank you so much for the feedback! I really appreciate it.

    Jun 1, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: The Wounds of Love

    Thank you so much for the feedback! I really appreciate it.

    May 31, 2020
  • Script » Realistic, Other Re: It Can Be Both

    Thank you!

    May 31, 2020
  • Article / Essay » General, Realistic Re: Look Up 2.0

    Thank you so much for the feedback! By the way, I love your profile picture.

    May 31, 2020
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: To the Other Half of My Heart

    Thank you!

    May 28, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Pain As An Afterthought

    Thank you!

    May 25, 2020
  • Article / Essay » General, Realistic Re: Look Up 2.0

    Thank you so much for the feedback! I really appreciate it. I did mean to put the word "be" in the first sentence- total slip up on my part. With ...

    May 25, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Pain As An Afterthought

    Thank you! I%u2019m glad you enjoyed it.

    May 25, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Pain As An Afterthought

    Thanks for the feedback! It probably took me like 2 hours to write this poem? I wrote it a while ago, and I was just looking through my old poetry ...

    May 25, 2020
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Narrative Re: Look Up

    Thank you so much for the feedback!

    May 25, 2020
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Narrative Re: Look Up

    Thank you!

    May 25, 2020
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Narrative Re: Look Up

    Thank you so much for the feedback! I do make a bit of a abrupt transition between the specifics in the speaker's life and then general stuff. When I say ...

    May 25, 2020
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: To the Other Half of My Heart

    Thank you so much for the advice! I totally agree with you. This is a fictional piece, so I don't have a real friend like Eliza, but if I did, ...

    May 25, 2020
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: To the Other Half of My Heart

    Thank you so much for your feedback!

    May 23, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Romantic Re: Almost Dead, Chapter 1

    Thank you for the feedback!

    Apr 27, 2020


To have more, you have to become more. Don't wish it was easier - wish you were better. For things to change, you have to change, and for things to get better, you have to get better.
— Jim Rohn