ElvenJedi

Sure! And I have that issue sometimes too; sometimes our imagination and ideas are too unique and amazing to put into words. Wonderful work of art, keep it up!

Thx for the advice! I think I'll rewrite this poem paying more attention to the atmosphere etc.!

Thanks for the review! I appreciate the encouragement!

Thanks for this review! Very helpful! I do admit this isn't one of my best works, but that's why I posted it; It needs as much revising and critique as ...

This poem is so emotional... I can tell you really poured you heart out on this. When I read this I really felt your sorrow and love for your friend ...

Ok! Yeah, I wanted to edit this Poem. Thx!

haha thx, well I've only been on here for a day, how would I know anyway? My assumption was hasty I suppose. Anyway, just wondering... is there a way to ...

Thank you for your review! I do struggle with forced rhyming, so these reviews are very helpful to me. And I do admit, I had mixed feelings about those lines ...

Thanks for this review! Yes, I do tend to struggle with forced rhyming, and that tutorial was helpful! I am new to YWS so I was definitely not understanding the ...