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EloquentDragon

  • The Return of the White Flame 1 (an exerpt)

    Spoiler! : This was based off of a dream I had. I want it to be really good, so please feel free to tear this apart. Be harsh if you ...

    7 min read
  • The Return of the White Flame 2 (an exerpt)

    This is part two. To view part 1, click here: viewtopic.php?t=81809 Spoiler! : I need help on pacing the action, please help me on this. “What is it Tash?” Urich ...

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  • The Return of the White Flame 3 (an exerpt)

    This is part view Part 1/2, click here: viewtopic.php?t=81809But there was nowhere to run. Tash reached the other side of the room and found himself faced with another locked door. ...

    7 min read


What really knocks me out is a book that, when you're all done reading it, you wish the author that wrote it was a terrific friend of yours and you could call him up on the phone whenever you felt like it. That doesn't happen much, though.
— J.D. Salinger, The Catcher in the Rye