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EllieArden

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Why would you care?

    This is great, I love the use of italics and it flows so well. It's also very emotive and really makes the reader think about the story of the person ...

    Aug 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: It's her.

    I love this, I have no criticism it's perfect :)

    Aug 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Delete

    This is brilliant. The first stanza is my favourite and your use of adjectives is exemplary. Just wow...

    May 14, 2013
  • Short Story » Culture, Realistic Re: The Account of the Noticeably Non-Black Coffee

    I loved the beginning. Got confused in the middle and smiled at the end. Re read it and came to the conclusion that your use of adjectives is exemplary. I ...

    Mar 26, 2013


The good ended happily, and the bad unhappily. That is what Fiction means.
— Oscar Wilde, The Importance of Being Earnest