ElizabethQueen

It's a good poem, but a little slow and wordy (edging on prose). I like the idea of the repetition of the tea/tea leaves though I think you could do ...

As an emotional piece for venting and getting something out of your heart and onto paper, it's very good. As a song, the chorus has a good flow and rhythm ...

First of all I absolutely love the title. It's great; short, catchy, hints at the humor of the story. Also the quick change from action to humor was great--the setup ...

Overall that was a very cool story, and I liked how the reader's perception of the killer went from seeing a killer to seeing a demon to seeing the angel ...

This is awesome. The repetition in the first paragraph works really really well. The image of 'the shell of Andrew' beginning to crack is a powerful one, as is the ...

Was he actually a spy? That was a bit murky, I'm unsure if he just feels like he's a spy for a bad guy because of what the government is ...

The sounds of the words of themselves are delightfully musical, and feel well suited to be spoken out loud. However the sentences, especially the visual, read more like prose than ...