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Re: The Mafia Of the Ocean
I loved the cliffhanger on this one!!! Really made you think. One question I have is, what time period does this take place in? It's unclear. Another thing I loved ...
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Re: Thank you, 5 (Chapter One: Moving In Day)
Thank you so much for your feedback. I realize that some of the paragraphs were a little wordy and I'm working on it for the next chapter. I think I'll ...
Oct 9, 2023 -
Re: Thank you, 5 (Chapter One: Moving In Day)
Oh my gosh!!! Thank you so much for reviewing this story!! This made my day!! I'll try to format it better next time! Should I put out the next chapter? ...
Oct 9, 2023 -
Re: Secret Agents of Fate (Part 1)
Hi! I'm here for a review! I love this piece! The writing style is gourgous and I'm really invested in the story. My one question is, it's unclear what the ...
Oct 9, 2023