Elizabeth

I liked it a lot.. much better than anything I have written or could ever have wrote.

LOL, better rating than Alex :nudge nudge: :-P Thanks again :-D

:-D I thought you were Alex for a second because i told him to not read this yet he might have. Thanks for the compliment :-D

ROTFLMAO wow Nate this is hilarious! Iwould pay to read it... well.... mabe 50 cents because i'm not made of money but stil....

Like... it's really good and all... is this like a part of hourglass... are yo going to connect all of them sooner or later because this is really good.

Meh, I don't know yet, I like the names I put on them even though they don't know... I dont' know why that ended up like that... let me check...

I know the feeling of that. I really liked it, pretty much Harley said all I was going to say. tee hee and I didn't understand why you said meat ...

I wrote this when Roy was being a little jerk to me. He said he liked me and asked we go out but in the hallway a friend asked if ...

On the coldest it had ever been in a very long time, and the moon was high, there was a woman with fair brown hair lying on a blanket in ...

Ok I really liked this. Overall I had to aggree with Brian, who are the Verhaldiandplants schmagga.....? What did they have to do with the shooting? Why did it have ...

LOL :-P Nice Try. Of course that will be in the title, but it's not the actual name.... Well, I cant let you go unsatisfyied :gives a poisonous scoripoin: there ...

Aww it's ok :gives Chanson a cookie: Sorry i just seem to take everything personally nowadays and I always have...

And that is the fact that makes me seem like my personal expierences and mind are iuninteresting.... you know what, forget it, I'm hold off on poetry for a while. ...

He bid the three women good night and walked through the door into the cozy fire lit area. He gazed out through the window as the gravediggers took his wife ...

Shouldn't it be too long? I mean I know I'm not the grammar master but still....