Elizabeth

Ugh... all hope for me is lost... You have out... worded The Black Rose.... There is nothing... I have to say.... Nothing I CAN say... Whoa... Whoa... Whoa....

Yeah a lot of grammar and punctuation mess ups. so I got to about... the second and a half paragraph. I liked what I read, but some things could have ...

(Shivers) More death now? What is wrong with this month... it can't be the cold... Anyway thanks for all the comments everybody.... I'm also sorry for those who have lost ...

Just checking back on it all... and what Bob said... Change the words, don't change the meaning. Meaning is EVERYTHING

Yeah, I'm pretty mad at my dad right now... and have been for a few months... It's extrememly annoying though. I don't know whether or not to just ignore the ...

I don't think I'll be able to produce another poem like this... Perhaps a hate one to my dad. Yeah, that one will come soon. Thanks for all the comments.

Shouldn't the A in America be capitalized? I liked it... But I got really confused... It was.... weird... but... enjoyable? (O_O) *Confuses self and leaves*

Is this about Poppi/Poppy leaving? I don't know I liked the lyrics they chilled me though I'm sorry nothing more to say I liked the chours though ---elizabeth

Wow... I didn't know about Tankas.... what are they? I want to try writing this. This made me think of an egyptian pharoh, I liked it :) Welcome!

Yeowch and all the things that have actually made me proud have been nothing. But somebody once told me that my emotions scare people off... Whatever I don't believe them ...

Thank you *mourns* I NEED A POETICALLY UNCLICHE HUG! *cries*

"Disgusting" states the O.A.P "I’m glad our daughter weren’t as sick as she" Weren't... that word disturbs me here.... This was good, it was sad and miserable and everything around ...

... It was too beautiful for words, if not a tad bit disturbing... You should take my title... most active poet... I am nothing now, compared to you :Sigh:

God is wearing black and this poem made me see a light And it's something I don't want to see again. I see age makes wisdom.

And for that you want to marry me!? You're easily impressed *pulls out a blue corvette* .... Wow, where did that come from! *is impressed*