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Hi bluecows! This poem is nice. I liked the feel of it, and that you've taken a commonly used idea for poetry, and made it your own. It had a ...

Hey there! Being an avid fan of Spiderman, I will say that I wasn't disappointed. You seemed to capture Spiderman/Peter Parker dual life perfectly. I loved your imagery and the ...

Hi Patatopie. This was an interesting poem, and it covers a very dark subject matter. 1. VOICE The voice in your poem almost seems as if this is coming from ...

Hi Kammie! I really liked this poem; your imagery was just breathtaking. It was short and to the point, which is something that I really like in poetry. Nothing really ...

Hi Power! Is English your first language? If it is, I'm surprised, because you seem to be making a lot of silly grammatical errors. like not putting spaces between commas ...

Hi Princess! This poem was really, really good. If you didn't have your note at the beginning, I'd still be able to tell that you put a lot of work ...

Hi Bailey! This poem was bad. What do I mean by that? Well, your rhyming is inconsistent, doesn't really make sense, and it just seems like you've added it in ...

Hi there! This was nice, especially for a first attempt. I agree with pretty much everything that Kamas said. Poems have layers. Right now what you've written seems like a ...

Hi there! I shall critique this provided that you do the following: Please separate this into stanzas. It's extremely hard to read and understand as a big block of text, ...

Hello! This was a nice poem. It was simple and cute; there isn't really much else to say about it. One thing I don't like is your repetition of 'As ...

Hi David! I just want to say that I really, really liked this. It seemed like a genuine medieval poem. It was beautiful, and the soft imagery and your use ...

Hi Kylan! This was a nice poem. I love your vivid yet simple imagery, and the lovely way I felt after reading this poem. It was refreshing, and I love ...

Hi again! Another great poem. It definitely took a different approach then the first poem. The feel and imagery of this poem is just fantastic. One thing I could comment ...

Hey there! I liked this poem. It right about the perfect length, and the verses had a nice lyrical rhythm. It was very to catchy to read, but there were ...

Hi Miss Rose! This was a nice poem. I will admit that I was a little click on this poem when I saw your title, as I, like many others, ...