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Hi Words! How are you? I see that you just joined YWS a few days ago-how are you liking it so far? Anyway, I quite like the idea behind the ...

Hi BrokenWing! So, I quite liked the story. Like Tenyo, I think that you did a really good job at capturing the emotion and atmosphere, especially in so short of ...

Hi Rulani! I didn't enjoy this piece. It didn't flat out suck, as the scene with the paper was amusing and entertaining. However, I just found your narrative confusing and ...

Hi, carden! Because you're a fantastic reviewer and active new member, I'm going to review this. Well, I liked it. A lot. It seems like the quality of works on ...

Hi! So, I'll have to agree with KitxKat and Carden. They both brought up excellent points that I just want to expand upon a little bit more, but I won't ...

Hi! So, I'm not quite sure what this felt like. It didn't feel very non-fiction like because you don't really describe anything particular that's happened to you or something that's ...

Hi! So, this was okay. It's definitely better then a few of the things that I have read in the past couple of days, but I still think that It ...

Hiya! I'm a little torn on what I think my overall view of this story should be. The idea is nice, but it's pretty skeleton-like in the sense that you ...

Hi there! So, is this supposed to be for Suzanne's contest? If so, then I wish you the best of luck! I don't know what feel or theme you were ...

Hi! So, I think my main problem with this poem is that it feels dry and bare. This is because you barely have any imagery or any kind of words ...

Hi! So, I see that you just joined YWS! Welcome! How are you enjoying it so far? Anyway, to your story! For one, I'm a little confused as to why ...

Hi! To me, it seems like this story could be so much more then what it's at right now. You start off with an interesting premise, but you don't go ...

Hi! I saw your blog post-welcome back to YWS! I hope it's every bit as good as it was when you left it. Anyway, the story. It's really too early ...

Hi! Elfwriter, what I can tell you right now is that this story is filled with a ton of wasted potential. It starts off with an interesting ideas and characters, ...

Hi, Jorge! I've seen you made some attempts to improve your spelling and grammar, and that's good. However, you could still do a lot better. One major rule you're missing ...