Elinor

Hiya, I think my main problem with this poem is how stilted and formulaic it seems. It feels like you were only writing this poem to satisfy requirements rather then ...

Hiya, This was so-so. It's definitely not terrible like some of the other poems that I've read and reviewed recently. Still it felt, in a lot of ways, like something ...

Hiya, This is a very lovely and sad piece. I was nearly in tears at the end--it's amazing how much emotion you were able to portray in such a short ...

Hiya, I will say that this is definitely an interesting and exciting piece. I loved the style that you were aiming for with this piece, and I think it was ...

Hiya, I'm a bit torn over my thoughts on this poem. For one thing, I really like the spirit and idea behind this poem; I can relate to it a ...

Hiya, I didn't enjoy this. Not that it was terrible; there were some nice things in, mostly your stylistic choices and some of your vocabulary. What really bothered me was ...

Hiya, This is really beautiful. I don't think I've ever read any poetry by you, and I can't believe how much I've been missing out. I love everything about this ...

Hiya, I think the thing I like the most about the story is that you take risks and don't shy away from creating the fullest story you can. Some parts ...

Hiya, This was really cute. It actually followed some coherence, unlike my poem, which was completely random. It's certainly very creative and humorous! Since our goal wasn't to be good, ...

Hiya, I'm not quite sure what to say about this piece. Your use of vocabulary and language was good throughout, and I loved how I could never tell what was ...

Hiya, Meh. I don't really like this bit. I want so, so much to like this story, but I just can't. Skins already brought up a lot of excellent points, ...

Hiya, So, I really want to like this piece. I think you've set us up with an interesting premise, and the ending sent a shiver up my spine. However, something ...

Hiya, You have gotten many good critiques on this poem so I'm not going to repeat any points that were made. I was very confused, and while your explanation cleared ...

Hiya, I really like this. It was very chilling, and your imagery throughout the piece was wonderful. I can imagine this sitting on the bookshelves of places like Barnes & ...

Hiya, There were some humorous bits to the piece, but overall it just struck me as somewhat flat.The premise you've set us up with is not very exciting. Dating is ...