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Hi there, Stel! Thanks for the request. I'll try to review this poem to the best of my ability, and I hope that you can find my comments useful! This ...

Hey, Bubbles! As requested. So, you've gotten some good feedback on this so far and I will be careful not to drone on too long and repeat what has already ...

Hey, Kamas! Thanks for requesting the review. Here I am to complete it -- poetry isn't my strong point but I will try to do my best. Overall, this was ...

Hey, Evi! :) Here is your requested review -- I'm glad I was able to get around to it! So, this was a good entry and there was a lot ...

Hello there. I see you have some strong opinions. That's perfectly fine that you feel strongly about something, but it might be good to stop and breath when you write ...

Hey Skins, it's me again to review the next installment of this, as requested. ;) You've gotten some good critiques on this so far so I won't be too long ...

Hi, Skins! So, I'll get to Part Three soon, but I figured that I would read this over quickly and give it a review. So, I liked this Part a ...

Hey, Evi. As requested! Fortunately I have some extra time this morning so that I'd take a look at this. All in all, this is very, very interesting and I'm ...

Hi, Skins! So, here is your requested review, and I'm sorry this took so long! This will be my first review in a while, so excuse the rustiness. *rolls up ...

Saaam. :D Hey, it's me to finally get to your promised review -- sorry this took so long! *hugs* So, for the most part I agree with the other reviewers ...

Hello! :) So, I'm terrible at reviewing poetry, so please excuse me if this is rusty or unhelpful in anyway. As a whole, I really liked it. It was short ...

Hey, Funky! So I thought this was a really cute story. You have a nice style of writing; it's very quirky and cute and it has the feel of a ...

Hi, Jalmoc! So, it's nice to see that there are other Halo fans on YWS! I haven't played the game in so long, but I love it, I really do. ...

Hey, Tenyo! So, I am a little confused as to whether this is an excerpt from the story proper, or it is merely a companion piece to go along with ...

Hi, Retro. :) So, I thought this was a cute little story. You had some good ideas and the ending has a feel that reflects the spirit of Christmas, and ...