Elinor

Hi there! So, this was an interesting little piece. You definitely know what you were writing about and didn't just do it on a whim, and I think the fear ...

Hi, Syn! So, I really thought that this piece was well-written and that you did a marvelous job with it. I like that it's very simplistic yet still very compelling; ...

Hi there, Story! Here I am, as requested! I apologize for the delay. I thought this was nicely thought out, and I can tell that it means a lot to ...

Hi, Skins! So, I don't really have much to say about this chapter, so this is going to be a brief comment. You've gotten some good advice so far, and ...

Hi there! So, I thought that was well-thought out and that the feel of this at the beginning and end was beautiful. Even though you haven't really disclosed any details ...

Hello there! So, I see that you have a lot of interesting stuff here in this story. I quite like the simplicity of this, and you seem to have developed ...

Hi! If you want to write a poem about why you don't like America, that's fine, but just be prepared to back it up. As poetry, this falls short because ...

Stori, This is an interesting an unique concept, and I like the voice that you're able to create for the diamond. However, this is way too short a story to ...

Hi Heather! So, I think is the first time I've ever read or reviewed something of yours, and I will say, your writing is a pleasure to read. You have ...

Hi Flemzo! So, I promised that I would take a look at this to you in chat -- and now I have. Apologies for getting to this so late, but ...

Hi Skins! Here I am as promised. So, I'm glad you put that list up there! It's really helpful. This review is going to be short as I don't really ...

Hi Skins! Yay, I'm so glad I finally got to this part. This was good as always, and I'm glad that Charlie and Zoey finally met -- I've been waiting ...

Hi, Chal! So, this was a nice read. You seem too have planned this out and know your characters well. I like the simplicity of this -- like StoryWeaver said, ...

Hi, Persephoneia! Thanks for requesting this -- I had a real pleasure reading through it. I don't have much to say so this critique is going to be brief. Your ...

Hi Glitter! So, this was an interesting story that has a nice concept to it, and it was very heartwarming to read about, even if it is a fiction. However, ...