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Hi, Luna! So, I like this a lot. You got a cool idea, and like how this is simplistic yet you manage to get across a lot. This has a ...

Hi, Princess! So, you have a neat concept, but right now, your poem is just that; a concept. It's very skeleton-like in the sense that there's not a lot of ...

Hi, Ninja! So, this was a really interesting story. I like how it's simple and to the point, and it doesn't waste excess time describing emotions that you already nail ...

Hey, Evi. :) Since you were kind enough to review my short story, I thought that I would drop by and give this a quick review. Overall, this is a ...

Hi, Pea! So, I don't usually do line by line, but since this is for a school assignment, I'm thinking that your teacher wants the grammar and such polished/structure at ...

Hi! So, I just had a few quick comments! I really like what you're trying to do here, but this needs a lot more detail and description for this to ...

Hi, Ashley! So, I was in need of something to review, and I thought that I would give this a look! It's definitely an interesting story and you have the ...

Hi, Idraax and Tenyo! I'm here, as requested. I just had a few quick comments! So, this was an interesting little poem, and it conjures up vivid and surreal images ...

Hi, Heather and Matt! Thought I'd drop by and give this a quick review. I will say that I like this a lot; I was confident in the poem that ...

Interesting. I say it because you deal with an interesting theme. No one likes to be rejected, but yet it happens. It's even more sad when you know the person ...

Hey! So, I just want to wish you two good luck in the contest, as I'm entered too. So, to your poem. I just had a couple of quick comments. ...

Hi, So, this was an interesting poem. You deal with a serious subject here, and you take it as such; yo knew what you were writing about here. There was ...

Hi there! So, I see that you circulate a lot of very interesting ideas in this story. Sci-fi is my favorite genre, and I especially enjoy either apocalyptic or post-apocalyptic ...

Alright, so! You've got some interesting stuff here! I like how you set up the story to be somewhat like the typical hero-wins-against-all-odds sports movie, yet you've chosen an activity ...

Hi, Tayler! So, this is a neat little short story. It's structured well, and the prose as well as the characterization is solid throughout. It's grammatically sound, showing that you ...