Elinor

Hey Carlito! I enjoyed this chapter a lot, and the group chat between the friends. As I say every chapter, I'm excited to continue reading and eventually follow through the ...

OH SNAP! IT HAPPENED! I really thought you did a fantastic job of building the tension in this chapter. I felt anxious for Summer, and while we knew this was ...

Hey Carlito! AHHH things are crashing and coming to their conclusion and it's exciting! I really appreciate how you've invested me in this story. I like this chapter conceptually, as ...

Hey LordStar! Elinor dropping by here to give you a quick review, as you requested. I really like this. I think you have a natural gift for script writing. It ...

OH SHNAP! I loved this entire chapter, from the phone call with May to the chat with Micah. I love how everyone's losing patience with Summer. My sense is that ...

Hey Carlito! I was thinking about this story the other day so I'm glad to see you've got a few new chapters for us! I really like that Summer is ...

Hey Carlito, I don't have too much else to say about this chapter that I didn't tell you in the previous two. The one thing I will say that I've ...

Hey Carlito! I liked this chapter a lot. I liked that May and Summer had a heart to heart. As I read more of this story, there's a podcast I ...

Hey there! Super excited to continue with this. I really like this chapter, and I really like the characters you've created. They're three dimensional and complex, and I'm invested in ...

Hey there! This was a really great chapter. The strongest parts of the piece are the chats between Micah and Summer. Not only is it the emotional weight of the ...

Hey! Really excited to get back into this. I enjoyed this chapter, and while it felt like a transitional one, I think you did a great job of showcasing Summer's ...

Hi LJF! Here for this your review as requested. Oof, okay. You weren't kidding when you said it would be dark. Because this is is a prologue, and you reference ...

Hey Horisun! I like the concept of this story. Sometimes I've had pretty weird or even vivid dreams and they've inspired me creatively in a multitude of different ways. Like ...

Oy vey. Summer Summer Summer. Wondering how she's going to get out of this one. The first thing that came up for me in this chapter is that if I ...

Hey! As always I've enjoyed reading your chapters, and I am very much invested in these characters and this story that you've created. I love that Micah spoke to Summer ...