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Re: The Rift Chapter 4- draft
Thanks so much for the review and now that I read over everything, your totally right about the knife, thanks!
Apr 25, 2017 -
Re: The Rift Chapter 3- draft 2
This review was very helpful, I will be making a few edits. Thanks!
Apr 23, 2017 -
Re: The Rift Chapter 3- draft 2
Thanks for the review. Your reviews are always so useful. I will be making a few edits like last time. :-)
Apr 23, 2017 -
Re: The Rift- chapter 1 - draft 2
This needs as much critics as possible I know it needs a lot of work.
Apr 19, 2017
