Elijah

I could say if it was possible to add more details around the male characters.If possible of course.Because in your story they just leave in sudden then some come back ...

Hope you have a good day/night too! Yes this is your own way of writing this is why I can not tell you that it is wrong.You are welcome.

I am a roleplayer and otaku so I know,bruh! x/D

Saw it!Saw it! *^* Thanks! By the way,I love your gangsta picture for your profile...just saying. ;v;

I am actually here from today so I actually do not know how to edit or recorrect the already made post! So sensei teach me ;v;) Yes please do that

Well,thank you a lot! I hope I can find someone to correct this with me while I am posting the parts one by one! The story is pretty long and ...

Thank you a lot! For the space that i need to put...well I was not putting any because I was used this way so now this is the firts time ...

Welcome!

This is what i want to hear!

I am still doing it only to make myself happy. Eh.. ;v; I wrote the next part already.

Of course!I wish you luck.

Thank you a lot...well i kind of gave up the idea to write and chose to only read but you are really helpful!

Thank you so much!

XD You just hit me with my own words ohhh! Anyways thank you.

Yes.I am your small critic waiting for your writing. ;v;